[Englisch] Stylistic Devices finden?

[!lkay]

Hallo..

Ich soll den folgenden Textausschnitt untersuchen auf Stylistic devices:

Spoiler:

Multiculturalism merely asserts that the right of a person to live their life as they wish includes the cultural dimension. If they wish to live in the most (supposed) classically of "English" styles - tea at 4pm, eating fish and chips or going to an English pub - they should be able to do so. Likewise if they want to live a more Jamaican lifestyle or to organise their life more around Buddhism or Judaism.
Currently, it is claimed that community relations in Britain are deteriorating and that there is an increasing polarisation in society threatening our safety - therefore the classic values of liberalism and multiculturalism should be abandoned.
It is striking that those who participate in this campaign are forced to falsify their evidence, invariably a sign that an argument is not merely wrong but intellectually disreputable. For example, the claim that we are "sleepwalking into segregation". Or the approach reflected in the CRE's conference this week, including sessions such as "Rivers of Blood: Did Enoch Powell get it right?"
A recent study by Dr Ludi Simpson from the University of Manchester found that British society is becoming more mixed, not more segregated, with the number of mixed neighbourhoods increasing from 864 to 1,070 in the decade to 2001. Far from ethnic groups becoming more separate, there is more mixing today than there ever been. According to Dr Simpson, inter-ethnic couples and children of mixed ethnic parentage have risen 20 per cent in 10 years, and there are four times more children than adults of mixed ethnicity.
The 2001 census shows that it is non-white residents, such as Indians, Caribbeans, Pakistanis and Bangladeshis, who are on balance leaving inner cities rather than moving into or staying in them. In other words, what is taking place is dispersal of ethnic groups - the opposite of segregation. And in London, racist attacks have declined by almost 40 per cent in six years.
This multicultural approach has helped make London astonishingly economically successful - it is by far the most international city in the world, beating even New York as the world's most important international financial centre. Even more importantly, multiculturalism has made London a diverse city with the greatest range of individual choice on earth.

Kann mir jemand Helfen? Ich hab ehrlichgesagt keine Ahnung, wie ich die finden kann..

Ich weiss wie die Stylistic Devices sind/aussehen, aber irgendwie fällt es mir in dem Text schwer Welche zu finden..

[!lkay]

Von wem wurde der Text geschrieben? Manche Saetze sind "durchgehend" bzw. run-on sentences. Vergleichungen kommen sehr oft vor, und sind auch stylistic devices, bzw. rhetorical devices. Die Benutzung von "like" oder "as" stellt eine Vergleichung dar (simile), und eine Metapher ist eine Vergleichung ohne der Benutzung dieser Woerter. Ein paar Saetze aus deinem Text:

Stylistic devices:

Simile:

Multiculturalism merely asserts that the right of a person to live their life as they wish includes the cultural dimension.

Points of view (third-person narration):

According to Dr Simpson, inter-ethnic couples and children of mixed ethnic parentage have risen 20 per cent in 10 years, and there are four times more children than adults of mixed ethnicity.

Ohne vorher zu wissen von wem der Text geschrieben wurde, lassen sich nicht viele stylistic devices finden (siehe hier).

Ein paar Verbesserungen:

This multicultural approach has helped make London astonishingly economically successful [...]

Es ist grammatisch gesehen nicht falsch zwei Adverben nebeneinander zu benutzen, es ist jedoch eine Frage des Tons und ob man den Satz nicht umschreiben koennte. In diesem Fall (denke ich) dass der Satz sich so umschreiben laesst:

Astonishingly, this multicultural approach has helped make London economically successful [...]

Likewise if they want to live a more Jamaican lifestyle or to organise their life more around Buddhism or Judaism. ,then

Was man in der Schule vielleicht nicht lernt, aber es ist sehr kritisch zu wissen: Wenn man seperat ist, kann man nicht noch mehr separater sein. Separat ist separat, in diesem Fall gibt es kein mehr und weniger.

Far from ethnic groups becoming more separate

(Ich wohne in USA seit 5 Jahren und bin Unistudent.)